Page one
Panel 1: Establishing shot of the space station floating in deep space. It is a gigantic, and complicated looking space station.
Panel 2: An old man on the space station hobbles slowly along a corridor of the ship. Wires and pipes run along the walls.
Panel 3: A close-up of the old man's stoic face which is old and wrinkled . He has a full head of white hair and his face hasn't been shaved in a few days.
Panel 4: Looking at him from behind he holds onto the wall for support. In the background there is a shadow coming around the corner.
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Page two
Panel 1: A young boy comes running around the corner in his purple junior space cadet uniform.
Panel 2: The boy slows to a walk when he sees the old man.
Panel 3: The two pass each other.
Panel 4: The old man smiles and nods at the boy.
Panel 5: The boy runs off.
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Page Three
Panel 1: Inside one cabin on the space station there is a middle-aged woman walking towards a door.
Panel 2: The door slides open automatically.
Panel 3: A crack of light from the door illuminates the aforementioned young boy in his bed.
Panel 4: The mother's silhouette is in the doorway.
Mother: “Goodnight, Albrecht”
Panel 5: Albrecht is in bed still.
Albrecht: “Goodnight, Mom”
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Page Four
Panel 1: The mother walks away and the doors are sliding shut behind her, but she stops when she hears Albrecht.
Albrecht: “Mom...”
Panel 2: The mother is in the doorway looking back at Albrecht
Albrecht: “Who is that old man who is always wandering the corridors?”
Panel 3: The mother sits down on the edge of the bed
Mother: “His name is Corbinian and he single-handedly saved this station once”
Panel 4: A younger looking Corbinian is standing stoically.
Mother: “The station was attacked by aliens 30 years before you were born, I was just a young girl then”
Panel 5: Corbinian is flying through space (not in a space-ship) amidst the alien spacecrafts dodging lazers. There are all sorts of fighter ships exploding.
Mother: “The aliens were too strong and defeated most of the Armada, but Corbinian was an immortal space-wizard.”
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Page Five
Panel 1: Albrecht sitting up in bed now.
Albrecht: “A wizard!? So he defeated the aliens?”
Panel 2: The mother is sitting on the bed.
Mother: “Thats right...”
Panel 3: Corbinian is shooting giant energy balls and annihilating the enemy space fleet
Mother: “...he annihilated the enemy and saved this space station”
Panel 4: Albrecht looks confused. His mother is sitting on the edge of the bed.
Albrecht: “But if he is immortal then how come he's so old?”
Mother: “Well...”
Panel 5: Corbinian and another human are facing off standing on an asteroid.
Mother: “The aliens had a wizard of their own.”
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Page Six
Panel 1: Both wizards are charging up energy blasts in the palms of their hands.
Mother: “He was a traitor... he turned to evil and was helping the aliens destroy all of us.”
Panel 2: The wizards are both straining. Their energy blasts have collided and both of them are trying to over-power the other.
Mother: “They were evenly matched but in the end Corbinian was victorious.”
Albrecht: “You still didn't answer my question!”
Panel 3: Corbinian is standing over the other wizard who is wounded and dying
Mother: “The traitor was actually Corbinian's twin brother”
Panel 4: Corbinian is holding his brothers body in his arms, a single glittering tear rolls down his eagle of a cheek.
Mother: “Once his brother died his powers and immortality slowly dwindled and he grew old and will die soon.”
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Page seven
Panel 1: The mother leans over and kissed Albrecht's forehead.
Mother: “Go to bed now Albrecht, you have a lot to do tomorrow”
Panel 2: Albrecht pulls the covers back over him and lays down, his eyes are still open as his mom leaves the room.
Panel 3: Corbinian as an old man is sitting up in his cabin staring out the window into space.
Panel 4: His face reflected in the window is him when he was still a powerful wizard.
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