Wednesday, September 15, 2010

The Suicide Party

Page 1:

Panel 1: A large white mansion with roman style columns and a ton of cars parked in the large front lawn all the way to the street. It is a nice neighborhood with large houses, this house is at least a few stories tall.

Panel 2: On the roof of the mansion a several kids in Togas are hanging around having drinks and smoking cigarettes.

Panel 3: Kid#1 has short brown hair and is sitting on a ledge on the roof and turns to the kid(Kid #2) next to him.

      Kid #1: “Where is everybody, there are so many cars”

Panel 4: The kid points down off the edge of the roof.

      Kid #2: “Down there.”

Panel 5: Kid #1 looking confused back at Kid #2.

      Kid #1: “Why are they all hanging out down there? I thought the party was on the roof”

      Kid #2: “They just jumped off.”

Panel 6: Kid #2 is staring back with a blank expression, Kid #1 is really bewildered now.

      Kid #1: “Like... suicide”

      Kid #2: “Yeah...”



Page 2:

Panel 1: Kid #1 doesn't go to look over the edge and just stays seated on the roof stoop unbelieving.

      Kid #2: “There is like a shit ton of dead bodies down there...”

Panel 2: Two guys walk towards the edge of the roof.

Panel 3: Without hesitation they jump off of the roof together.

Panel 4: Kid #1 stands up and turns to look at Nikolas who is at the far end of the roof. This is Nikolas' house.

      Kid #1: “But why would Nikolas throw a suicide party!?”

Panel 5: Nikolas is in the distance chatting and sipping on his drink.

      Kid #2: “He didn't, he just said it was an anything goes party.”

Panel 6: Kid #2 looks at Kid #1 with a shrug.

      Kid #2: “I guess thats just what everyone wanted to do”


Page 3:

Panel 1: Kid #2 starts to walk towards the edge following another person who has just jumped.

Panel 2: Kid #2 tosses himself off the roof.

Panel 3: Very few people are still hanging out on the roof.

Panel 4: There are cars completely filling the driveway and front yard and lined up down the street.

Panel 5: Kid #1 sits back down on the roof stoop.

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